Hello, everyone!
The next chapter's up, for those of you who are interested. :)
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Marlene made a furious noise from somewhere on his left, and there was a clatter as a wand fell. Sirius rolled onto his side in time to see the man release Marlene. She fell to the floor, limp and unmoving, and Sirius crawled to her side, ignoring the man for the moment. He, Sirius realised detachedly, didn’t seem to mind; he just watched from beneath his hood as Sirius felt for a pulse and found none.
“No,” he croaked. He held his hand above Marlene’s nose, hoping to feel a whisper of breath, but none came. He shook his head, trying to keep it together. His eyes were stinging.
“Last man standing,” the Serpent Sworn man said softly, from above him. Sirius understood the implications; the Aurors and the trainees – Dora, Mad-Eye, Robards, Scrimgeour, all of them – were all either dead, or captured. He refused to think about that in any more depth. Not now.
“No,” Sirius said. He reached for Marlene’s hand, and hoped that the movement distracted the man from Sirius’ other hand, which had just curled around his wand.
... Not looking good, is it? :/
But no cliffies this week, haha; it's resolved now.
Until next week!
MarauderLover7.
Hello. SilverDarkHorse here. I just read your reply to my review on this chapter. You are at the Uni of Adelaide? That is incredible - so am I!!! What are you studying, and what year? I'm going into 2nd year bachelor of Architectural Design :D
ReplyDeleteHello. :) I am, haha. :P Are you really?! :D
DeleteI'm going into second year Animal Science. :)
Imteresting. Breaks the stereotype myth that scientists can't write :P Is Adelaide your hometown? I came there only last year, but am absolutely loving it :)
DeleteHaha, yeah, I suppose it does. :P It is - been here forever, minus a few years that we spent interstate; it's a nice place to live, because it's not too crowded. :)
ReplyDeleteHi, it's the fanfiction author Lumosify here, and I wanted to say how amazing your story is! I haven't finished reading Innocent yet, but I'm already planning to read Initiate and whenever I start reading a chapter I can't stop. You've done a bloody brilliant job on this story. Keep Writing!
ReplyDeleteHello! :D Aww, thank you, that's lovely to hear. :)
ReplyDeleteI will!
Thank you for the message!
MarauderLover7.