As promised, I've just put the next chapter of "Defining Moments" up. I've also had a request for an excerpt of "Innocent" and that will be up after I have finished publishing updates about "Defining Moments".
Excerpt from Chapter 3:
“He deserves
to be put down,” Severus muttered.
Black lifted
his fist so quickly Severus hardly saw, and even quicker, Potter had smothered
what was sure to have been a painful blow. Then Potter snapped his own fist
back and it collided with Severus’ jaw. He doubled over, clutching his face. The
teachers were on their feet but Potter made no move to attack him again.
“How dare
you!” Potter snarled, eyes blazing. The air seemed to thrum with power and Slughorn
looked quite unnerved. The papers on Dumbledore’s desk fluttered but the window
was shut and Severus doubted wind was strong enough to knock books off the
shelves.
Thank you to all those who have reviewed Chapter 2. :)
Bye for now.
MarauderLover7.
Absolutely incredible! So far I love it. Actually, I've always wanted to read about the incident with Snape in the tunnel. This is just what I had imagined :3
ReplyDelete- LittleEllehammer
Yay! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :D The incident's always fascinated me - I know Sirius doesn't exactly see eye to eye with Snape but I can't imagine it was ever a deliberate murder attempt. I really wanted to explore the motives behind that night, and this story was born. :P
DeleteThank you so much for the comment!
MarauderLover7.
Looking forward to the last of your story.
ReplyDeleteLove the new design btw ^^
- LittleEllehammer
The next chapter will be up at some point tonight. :)
DeleteYay! Thank you! I'm really happy with how it's turned out. :D
Thank you for the comment!
MarauderLover7.
I really like this story! And I'm looking forward to innocent :D I'm sure it's gonna be as awesome as the rest of your stories :D You're my favorite fiction writer!
ReplyDeleteAww! Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D I'm really excited about "Innocent" too - it's quite different to anything I've ever written before but I'm having a lot of fun coming up with ideas. :)
DeleteAww! Thank you so, so much! :D
Thank you for the comment!
MarauderLover7.